Light as a feather

I wasn’t looking for hope, but I found it. I was thinking a couple weekends ago about a new adventure that I’ve found myself on. I was thinking about both rapid and calm waters. Of course, I was in my own head analyzing every action and inaction a million times over.

Small bird with orange breast perched on branch with misty mountains and sunrise in background

An AI image of a small bird sitting on a leafy branch overlooking misty mountains at sunrise.

And then I stumbled across Emily Dickinson’s poem, “Hope Is the Thing With Feathers.” I wouldn’t call myself a natural poetry lover. I have to work at analyzing and making sure that it says what I think it says. I had to read the poem two, three times. I couldn’t get over the power in Dickinson’s writing.

She defines hope as an enduring, resilient, and selfless force. A delicate, but tough bird that perches in the soul and through thick and thin, hell or high water, and through every other cliche you think of, sings a beautiful melody without fail. It requires nothing, but gives everything it has.

As I continue my adventure, it struck me as exactly the words I needed to hear.

Small bird with orange chest perched on leafy branch with sunrise and misty hills in background

An AI image of a small bird resting on a branch overlooking a misty sunrise.

Hope Is The Thing With Feathers

“Hope” is the thing with feathers —

That perches in the soul —

And sings the tune without the words —

And never stops — at all —

And sweetest — in the Gale — is heard —

And sore must be the storm —

That could abash the little Bird

That kept so many warm —

I’ve heard it in the chillest land —

And on the strangest Sea —

Yet — never — in Extremity,

It asked a crumb — of me.

Is there a poem that moves you?


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44 thoughts on “Light as a feather

  1. My favorite would have to be “The Knowing” by Sharon Olds, which beautifully captures the essence of a deep, committed relationship where true intimacy transcends the physical realm.

    I also like Hope Is The Thing With Feathers, but had to chuckle because, just the other day, I came across this response poem, “Hope Is Not a Bird, Emily, It’s a Sewer Rat” by Caitlin Seida. Not exactly moving, but a different perspective, nonetheless.

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  2. beautiful poem. my favorite is this one by mary oliver, “The Summer Day.” Here it is:

    Who made the world?
    Who made the swan, and the black bear?
    Who made the grasshopper?
    This grasshopper, I mean —
    the one who has flung herself out of the grass,
    the one who is eating sugar out of my hand,
    who is moving her jaws back and forth instead of up and down —
    who is gazing around with her enormous and complicated eyes.
    Now she lifts her pale forearms and thoroughly washes her face.
    Now she snaps her wings open, and floats away.
    I don’t know exactly what a prayer is.
    I do know how to pay attention, how to fall down
    into the grass, how to kneel down in the grass,
    how to be idle and blessed, how to stroll through the fields,
    which is what I have been doing all day.
    Tell me, what else should I have done?
    Doesn’t everything die at last, and too soon?
    Tell me, what is it you plan to do
    with your one wild and precious life?

    Mary Oliver

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  3. Dickinson’s poems are always so good. I also recommend “I heard a fly buzz when I died”. It’s one of my favorite pieces of hers 🙂

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  4. Wonderful poem! There is a haiku that I read in Bittersweet by Susan Cain, written by the Japanese poet Issa after the death of his daughter, and it’s about loss and grief. Even though we try to move on with our lives, our loved ones are still with us until the end.

    “It is true
    That this world of dew
    Is a world of dew.
    But even so…”

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  5. Wow, that Emily Dickinson really had a way with words!

    I’ve always loved Shakespeare’s Sonnet 18 (“Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?”). Or if I’m feeling more morose, Dylan Thomas’s “Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night” strikes a chord.

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    1. Oh I get feeling morose. Love W.H. Auden’s Funeral Blues. “Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come.” Now that’s some description!!!

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  6. Love this! When I worked at the hospital, one of the most important things that we could give parents was HOPE! And that’s why the Title of my memoir is Raising Jess: A Story of HOPE! (I HOPE that doesn’t seem like a sales pitch ) 😉😂V

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  7. I’m not a poetry person either, Brian – and always struggled in these units in high school English. But the right poem from time time pierces through the foggy head and straight into the heart and soul. This poem you shared did just that – beautiful!

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